Friday, July 16, 2010

What do u think of this poem i just wrote i am 17 plz be honest plz tell me if it sucks or not???

Here I Am








Here I am.


Once again.


Pen in hand.


Finding myself broken.


Everything’s…broken.


Once again.


Here I write.


The words which I cannot speak.


Reflecting on the pain in my heart.


Which leaves me weak.


Once again.


Here I cry.


Tears like rain.


Slip from my eyes.


Every drop, releasing pain.


Once again.


Here I wait.


An empty life.


In this empty place.


Just another lonely person searching for a familiar face.


Once again.


Here I live.


Day by day.


Waiting for hope to find me.


And take me away.


Once again.


Here I stay.


Looking for something.


Anything, to believe in.


That will get me through yet another day.


Once again….


Here I Am.


Here I Write.


Here I Cry.


Here I Wait.


Here I Live.


Here I Stay.





Here I Am….

What do u think of this poem i just wrote i am 17 plz be honest plz tell me if it sucks or not???
WOW!!!!! me like it.
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