A fading glimpse,
A noise,
Then silence.
Another stranger passing by.
A hand to shake,
A smile,
We laugh.
Another name I won't remember.
A face, familiar, yet new,
I've seen,
Somewhere.
Another "friend" I think I've met.
A voice I've heard,
A pause,
Then laughter.
Another disembodied name.
An awkward hug,
Afew,
quick words.
"I love you too, whoever you are"
What do think of this poem? I need a name too plz.?
It's a really good poem. I liked it very much.
"Stranger Friend"
"Crowd of Strangers"
"Crowd of acquaintances"
"Acquaintances"
Reply:its goodish i like it............... the name should be familiar faces
Reply:I loved it!
What about "Unspoken Love"?
Reply:i actually like it... it's short enough that i want to read it, yet long enough that i can get into it... also you use great descriptive words and i can really get a sense of what this person is feeling
id think a name like "Empty Faces" or "Alone in a Sea of People" or "Lonely Confusion"
Reply:I like it. Is sounds like the events that we all go through wach day. Meeting new poeple and forgeting their name, strangers passing by, people we think we've met before but is also a new friend. It's a cool poem.
You should name it..... "Passer By"
Reply:its not bad, bodies of perception
Reply:i love it, how about "faces" or "people"?
Reply:'' missed you mom ''
Reply:The busker
Reply:i really like that!!!!
how about
"The strangers we love"
or
"people"
IDK something having to do with people or strangers
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