My new poem what do you think?

where is she?








Someone missing,


A familiar face,





Daring to be called,


Out of her hiding place,





She (mingles?) Shakes hands with death,


Every night before each meal,





She hides herself in deep,


Where no one but he,


Can penetrate,





Calling to her spirit,


No one but she,


Can hear it.

My new poem what do you think?
The last stanza is the best, but the poem has some inappropriate pauses I think. When the reader sees a comma, the reader pauses, and this doesn't work well in this particular poem. For example, the last stanza would be read best in two thoughts.


"Calling to her spirit.


No one but she


can hear it."
Reply:Well--- it's a start.
Reply:y does she shake hands with death? i dont get that part but the rest is realllly good jesus missy i wanna write good poetry lol see ya soon ♥ya