Do you like my POEM?...tell me if it makes sense or if you get the message im trying to convey??

I watched as a stranger i once knew pass by


his hands waved with obligation


has he stared blanky with cold eyes


A flash of warmth hits my cheeks


as my head fills with memories


I now call broken dreams


So sad that this stranger is only a fragment, a reminder


a scar that is etched upon my heart


Passion turns into tears


His touch into open wounds


His name whispers in the wind


I tell myself to walk away


but my heart still reaches and gropes


for something that is lost, yet never known


I watched as he walks away, with a look of indifference


upon his face


He truly is a familiar stranger...


a title i must also bare to him as well

Do you like my POEM?...tell me if it makes sense or if you get the message im trying to convey??
Yes I love this poem I can really see the message you are trying to convey. I think who should try to get this published or if you have a bunch of good poems type them on microsoft word or something like that print them all off staple them together and try to get it published because if you have other poems like this it would be a great seller in my opinion at least i would buy it. because i love this poem no joke








Good Luck,





Cory McEwen
Reply:I really liked it





you loved him, he hurt you, you try to forget, to not care
Reply:whoa what a wonderful poem with so much heartache and pain' and i loved how you explain it with so much emotion...nice really nice.,
Reply:I think so. You're saying that you were once in love with this man and since then you have lost that feeling because he hurt you. You're telling yourself to move on but it's very hard and you are imbetween two roads; one going to what you know is wrong but is the easiest, the other going to what you know is write but is the hardest.
Reply:at first I thought you were with another man and when you touched him or he touched you, you would remember the other guy you where with.





I love the poem and I would give it a 1 for very good.


keep writing.


have a good day.